Write page 217 of your autobiography essays

I like how you incorporated upenn in your "future", with the tapping on the shoulder thing.

However, I don't know if you can say that cancer is no more..

I feel as if that's a little too big of a stretch to be believable.

And I think you should write "University of Pennsylvania" instead of Upenn..

Write page of your page autobiography.

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Penn removed its famous essay prompt — “write page of your page autobiography” — from its supplemental application.

I turn over in bed, hoping to sleep more before I have to head to school.

I am not sure how to approach the essay.

they might think it's a little too informal? I don't know, my guidance counselor suggested it to me for my supplement to Duke.

"I had spent many years building this hospital and with the help of my very supportive husband, Greg, I had done it."

Is "very supportive husband, Greg" necessary?

Why the name Greg? It sounds a little arbitrary..

But I also made my page capable of being either the first or the last page.

What is "it"? Done what? I think it would be better if you wrote (just a suggestion, you don't have to take it):

"I had spent many years building this hospital, and with the help of my supportive husband, I have